Creative Writing Ink Exercise August 23
Slanted days arranged like
the lines of your pictures
so hard to know whether you
were coming or going
what drew you to those places
edges emptied but framed
witnessed by the leaves
and shadows of people
walking the unknown
Near the Hindmarsh River estuary close by at Victor Harbor there are beautiful resilient swamp paperbark trees. A boardwalk and trail lead around them; in winter the surface of the water in the small lagoon next to the trail flirts with the trees' reflections on those still days that have one stop, enchanted. This blog is to follow the trail wherever that may be lead across the world of enchantment and earth rapture.
Hi Keith. Some great images and love the reference to "edges emptied but framed." This week's writing exercise is up too, sorry for the delay. Thanks:) Olive
ReplyDeleteHi Olive, thanks, I am running behind; will catch up this weekend with two poems
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