Creative Writing Ink - Writing Prompt: September 27th
The old door, half ajar, a darkened space you love
to photograph, have to! Number twenty seven, a few short steps
from the corner, the spidery cracked cement of the old town
you'd seen in a dream when you were younger
here right now so that you must stop shake your head
knock gentle on the door peer in
hesitate on the step the place in-between
excited uncertain push the door more
breathe in the smell of books, damp, paper yellowing with age
tobacco smoke, look at the old man paintings
on walls that seem to seem to stoop
just as you raised your camera
That sudden flash, tears quicker than thought.
Near the Hindmarsh River estuary close by at Victor Harbor there are beautiful resilient swamp paperbark trees. A boardwalk and trail lead around them; in winter the surface of the water in the small lagoon next to the trail flirts with the trees' reflections on those still days that have one stop, enchanted. This blog is to follow the trail wherever that may be lead across the world of enchantment and earth rapture.
Showing posts with label word shavings. Show all posts
Showing posts with label word shavings. Show all posts
Sunday, October 3, 2010
Saturday, September 25, 2010
Bubbled
I tell myself I've moved on
gone beyond that old refrain
walked the long lone bridge
away from the clouds
of our unbecoming
you said
your body's silky touch
silver Celtic brooch
moon sung white skin
linger in my mind
no matter how hard I try
the bridge that stretches
and now divides
still unites the you that I knew
with the me who walks
so that I must get off the road
walk the beach let the sea
cool my feet put my hands in the clouds
let the water rush over and around me
sky lit, washed, tidal.
gone beyond that old refrain
walked the long lone bridge
away from the clouds
of our unbecoming
you said
your body's silky touch
silver Celtic brooch
moon sung white skin
linger in my mind
no matter how hard I try
the bridge that stretches
and now divides
still unites the you that I knew
with the me who walks
so that I must get off the road
walk the beach let the sea
cool my feet put my hands in the clouds
let the water rush over and around me
sky lit, washed, tidal.
Tuesday, August 10, 2010
Blue Tongued Day: Creative Writing Ink photo of August 3
Sky Fields
She took him to the edge of the field
where the blue flowers had begun their bloom
He was blind. She moved his hand
to one of the flowers. He sighed as his fingers
first one then another, touched the outburst
of blue; a shiver ran up his spine; a lone tear
bubbled. How many are here he asked. Enough
she said and moved his hand to where there
there were more. I can feel them going into the earth
and talk with the air; they are rich with sun
He stayed still, quiet now so she steadied him
her hands on his back and shoulder. The land
tilts, he said. I can hear the clouds. There are people
buried here, close, long ago. This is a dreamers
sky road that goes past the trees and the mound.
The earth remembers. Yes she said, you are right
here you are buried, here you return.
She took him to the edge of the field
where the blue flowers had begun their bloom
He was blind. She moved his hand
to one of the flowers. He sighed as his fingers
first one then another, touched the outburst
of blue; a shiver ran up his spine; a lone tear
bubbled. How many are here he asked. Enough
she said and moved his hand to where there
there were more. I can feel them going into the earth
and talk with the air; they are rich with sun
He stayed still, quiet now so she steadied him
her hands on his back and shoulder. The land
tilts, he said. I can hear the clouds. There are people
buried here, close, long ago. This is a dreamers
sky road that goes past the trees and the mound.
The earth remembers. Yes she said, you are right
here you are buried, here you return.
Monday, August 9, 2010
Saturday, August 7, 2010
Word Shavings: Reverie
I've started reading Thomas Ogden's 'Reverie & Interpretation : Sensing Something Human (Karnac Books, 2005 edition). It's a great book about psychoanalysis.
He has some very astute, useful comments about the psychoanalytic process and the importance of language in that.
'Words and sentences', he writes, must be allowed a 'certain slippage'.
He cautions against stifling imagination by insisting on trying to define what we mean by 'ever increasing precision'.
"Imagination depends on the play of possibilities' (Reverie & Imagination, p3)..
Slippage, I like that.
He has some very astute, useful comments about the psychoanalytic process and the importance of language in that.
'Words and sentences', he writes, must be allowed a 'certain slippage'.
He cautions against stifling imagination by insisting on trying to define what we mean by 'ever increasing precision'.
"Imagination depends on the play of possibilities' (Reverie & Imagination, p3)..
Slippage, I like that.
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